Pleasure of Pain
Love is not enough with
you,
That sugar-coated love,
That over-rated love,
It does not define us,
Come; walk out through
the darkness of love
And hurt me this time,
Elate me, agitate me,
Defeat me, destroy me,
The tender touch of
love,
My skin won’t sense it
Agonise me in love,
that’s all my heart feels,
that’s all my heart feels,
Leave my wounds
exposed,
And let it worsen up
I find solace in this pain.
I find solace in this pain.
Let the suffering be a
part
of my being,
Never take that away,
or substitute it with love,
or substitute it with love,
Peace lies in pain,
Never coated with sugar,
not defined in degrees,
Never coated with sugar,
not defined in degrees,
Never misread,
or interpreted wrong,
Without hopes, without
dreams,
This is the way,
I want your essence to stay this way,
I want your essence to stay this way,
So devoid me of myself,
And fill me up with
you,
I won’t shed a tear
then,
Even a drop of you,
I won’t lose,
like I lost myself in that moment.
I won’t lose,
like I lost myself in that moment.
Let the time fly back
to that moment,
When I was you,
And you were me,
Entwined with an
ethereal sin,
A sin of our eternal
love
Eternal ache,
My sacred sin,
That still connects us.
A new concept....the flow of words is amazing! "You can put life in words"- this is what I feel about this post. Good work!
ReplyDeleteCould not figure out...if it was the love that was spoken or pain that was expressed. Gave me a mixed feeling of both...extremes of both ends. I feel the reader will pick emotion out of his/her own experience...Loved that freedom of choice this piece gives.
ReplyDeleteIn one word...experimental in an extraordinary way! Keep it up!
I dont have any idea of literature,,words,,love...but seeing this i feel like attempting.. contact a publisher soon..life is moving fast..all d best..way 2 go dear.. :)
ReplyDeleteThe best parts for me:-
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Love is not enough with you,
That sugar-coated love,
That over-rated love,
It does not define us,
Come; walk out through the darkness of love
2)
Let the time fly back
to that moment,
When I was you,
And you were me,
Entwined with an ethereal sin,
A sin of our eternal love
Eternal ache,
My sacred sin,
That still connects us.
What i call this a poem or prose?
Anyways you really know what you write or you know love better than others. Nice work!
I loved the line: Love is not enough with you...
ReplyDeletedo you still write?..
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